“ I think what you published made a great deal of sense. But, what
about this? suppose you added a little information? I am
not suggesting your information is not solid., but what if you added a headline
that grabbed folk's attention? I mean El día que fuimos teloneros de Leo Jiménez
is a little vanilla. You could glance at Yahoo's home page and see how
they create news headlines to get people to open the links.
You might add a video or a related picture or two to get readers interested about what you've written. Just my opinion, it would
make your posts a little bit more interesting. ”