“ I think that everything wrote was very reasonable.
But, think about this, suppose you added a little
information? I ain't suggesting your information isn't solid,
however suppose you added a title that makes people desire more?
I mean El día que fuimos teloneros de Leo Jiménez is a
little boring. You could peek at Yahoo's home page and watch how they create article titles to grab people interested.
You might try adding a video or a picture or two to grab people interested about what you've got to
say. Just my opinion, it could make your posts a little livelier. ”